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Shimmering Thunder


Because there is sadness, we cherish happiness. And because there is anger, kindness is born.

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  • 6 weeks
    Another update

    I probably shouldn't say this, but I'm making good progress. I have written almost four new chapters in a few days. From finishing Chapter 9 to the beginning of Chapter 14, which is probably going to be the last chapter for this part. Considering how long I have been working on this already, this is major progress.

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  • 8 weeks
    Update

    I just wanted to say that I'm still working on the sequel to The Power Within. I haven't abandoned writing or this site. I recently got over a major roadblock in my story. However, this doesn't mean that I will publish anything anytime soon. But I still uploaded all the chapters here just in case I need to press the button. I had a small situation irl that made me come back to this project again.

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  • 17 weeks
    The poet of darkness

    You failed me,
    My trust you defiled.
    You hurt me,
    My heart you stabbed.

    Give me a reason,
    To forgive...

    My soul you crushed,
    It made me bleed.
    My smile you erased,
    It made me cry.

    Give me a reason,
    To forget...

    Here in the dark,
    Alone and afraid.
    Here in the night,
    Fragile and drained.

    Give me a reason,
    To trust again...

    :ajsleepy:

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  • 43 weeks
    I'm feeling lost.

    I know I haven't been updating for a long time or anything. I'm just very tired at the moment. I feel like I'm at the end of my rope here. I'm just so tired of everything and everyone. This world. I'm struggling to keep finding any reason to smile anymore. I'm just so bitter, unhappy, depressed and sad all the times. And I have no idea what to do to fix everything. And nobody cares. Nobody listen

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  • 69 weeks
    Last one for this year.

    Merry Christmas and happy holidays to everypony! :twilightsmile: :heart:

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Sep
16th
2022

Another roadblock · 4:34pm Sep 16th, 2022

So... I decided to go back to my sequel and continue the story. I wrote a good two chapters, taking a radical turn in the plot only to notice that now I'd have to skip like 8 months forward in the middle of the story without making it awkward or super long. And not only that, but after a huge cut like that, another big twist would take a place and the story would be over shortly after that. How in the world am I going to pull that off? I mean, during those 8 months would happen a LOT. And I can't make the story so long I'd try to cover those months separately. It would be too shattered.

The problem is that I kinda like the direction I took the story to... But I don't think it would be possible to pull it off in any sensible way. That leaves me pretty much only one choice. Going back two whole chapters and deleting them. Starting all over again from the same spot I was stuck at for months myself. And if I hate something it's losing the progress I have made. Like playing a game for hours only to have a power cut and realizing you didn't save even once.

I guess I have no choice but to abandon this new plot line and try something else. I mean, I'd probably have to cut a few months at some point ANYWAY, but that much all at once? With everything that was happening in the store at that time? I don't think that's possible. But what else could I write? What direction to take from there? I'm so stuck. :raritydespair:

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