"Why don't you post updates?!"

Becaus I was sick.

Really sick! I mean I wasn't close to be in hospitle or so, but if I you know what I mean with "Ich habe die Hälfte des Regenwaldes an Taschentüchern verbraucht!" then... you know what got through.

As I hade postet before, 2500 words are done and will got to the rest know. Well I had enough time to think.

But this cold/infection/what-not had crashed my mood to wright totally. And to be honest you don't want me to wright things in bad or sour mood.

It goes like this then:

everthing was fine, till he snapped. He grows a metal dick, raped every living being in sight twice and then ripped of there heads. then he set for auto destruct. The black hole generator realised the saftey and within seconds Equus was gone.

Fin

You don't want me to wright in bad mood. Trust me.

Comments

[epicdonus1123 BOT]

[Taloon85]

591786
dammit you stalker... not even half minute

I just read again what I have written.
Either it is still the cold or I'm complettly out of practise to write in english.

[epicdonus1123 BOT]

591811

[Kabuto901]

K

[Cirrus_Brony]

Die das Problem mit der englischen...
Amerikaner sind verrückt!

Aber ich kann nicht auf das nächste Update warten!

(wenn die gut, hoffe, Sie fühlen sich, besser!)

Einen schönen Tag noch!

[Taloon85]

591901
pls, for celestias sake, stop this google translater.

And I don't just mean Cirrus_Brony.

I can read english quit good. I know what you're trying to say.
I have only a problem to build a sentence in english that make sense. Grammatic and all.

[Taloon85]

591890
don't know if it's was just a cold or something worse. It just took me out for almost two weeks.

[Cirrus_Brony]

...
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I actually wrote that myself. I can mostly carry a conversation in German. Just I have a horrid English (as in British) accent. So if you don't want me to speak in German I'm good with that. (I was getting tired of checking my grammar with my dad...)

EDIT:
Who else isn't sure of what to make of the newer look on FimFiction? I like the new artwork, and it is easier to do a few things, but I couldn't find a few things on my Dashboard, and the like/dislike button tends to glitch. So I don't know what to think...

[Taloon85]

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dammit I'm sorry. but to be honest it looks really like google tranlater messed up. Let me try to help with the grammar...

Die das Problem mit der englischen... (I don't really know what yo try to say here. Maybe "The Problem with english..."? Then it would be:
Das Problem mit der englischen Sprache...
Amerikaner sind verrückt! (Pretty simpel, "Americans are crazy!" And if you wanted to say this its correct. correct treanslated... )

Aber ich kann nicht auf das nächste Update warten! ("But I can't wait for the next update", correct tranlated)

(wenn die gut, hoffe, Sie fühlen sich, besser!) (Again really difficult to understand, but the message comes across. "I hope you feel better soon." Better translation would be:
(Ich hoffe sie fühlen sich bald besser.) or (Ich hoffe du fühlst dich bald besser.) "you" can be translatet to the formal "sie" (for buisness partner, employer, someone you don't know personal, someone you respect... or disrespect: You are an asshole! Sie sind ein Arschloch!) or to the personal "du" (mostly only for someone you personal know, but the teenager in germany using it for everyone and this looked down on. They find it cool but if they speak like this to their future employer... they mostly don't get the job.)

Einen schönen Tag noch! ("Have a nice day!" correct translated)

I hope this was usefull and understandabel

[Cirrus_Brony]

Danke. I appriciate it, my dad hasn't been to Germany since 1989...

Well I think I'll just stick to my 'Pip Pip, Cheerio' and 'Govnah' etc...
(By the way... One British joke and I'll be angry. We don't acctually say that. )

But what do you think about the new look on fimfiction?

[Taloon85]

594147
well it's new and with everything what's new, you have problems to adapt. "The older was easier." Of course because you have used it for quit some time. "There are bugs." Well it's software, of course there are bugs, but they will be dealt with. "I don't like the new look" Your own personal taste. Ask the Admin for an style button.

[Cirrus_Brony]

I didn't say I don't like the new look. I rather like the new artwork. But I figured everything out now, so I should be good! Plus I am currently writing the prologue if my first story!! *squee*

It is at 3,659 words in the prologue and about 1,000 in the ideas/notes for the storyline!

By the way, any advice for me if I hit a writers block?