You decide · 8:08pm Mar 4th, 2021
Hey guys so with Jewels our new character in the story. I wanna know what do you think should she go home or follow Shisai on his journey??
Spill your thoughts my dear shadows
I just started writing my first story May the light guide me on my path and the darkness have my back.(tm)
Hey guys so with Jewels our new character in the story. I wanna know what do you think should she go home or follow Shisai on his journey??
Spill your thoughts my dear shadows
Why not have her go home have something and happen that makes it so she will follow Shisai. For example make it that the village will hate her due to the death of the other children or have her just decide to follow him after saying goodbye to the ones she loves.
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I wanna be one of the authors who plans through the courses or paths if you will, giving the readers two choices in which they choose and it directs the story in the direction they want, in which gives me more of a challenge and makes writing more fun.
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That is also a good way of writing, also challenging yourself is good.
If she decides to go home, she will most likely make the other villagers aware of Shisai's existence and be hated by the other villagers. If drama is what you're going for, then this is the choice.
But personally I think she should go with him and have the village believe she died with the others. But, she should have a valid reason for wanting to follow him. More than just fear of being hated. Maybe she was bullied and discriminated by the villagers because she's a dragon, or maybe she's an orphan with a tragic past like Shisai and feels connected to him.
Sorry if this was a long comment. I'd say she should follow Shisai.
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Cool and those are some good points right there watashi no tomodachi.