new idea for story, want to run it by readers.

Hello again, it's me, NJH12, so i've had this idea in my head for awhile.

and was wondering if any of you would read this story idea.

here is the setup, Sunny Olive, an earth pony stallion who has problems expressing his feelings and express them in morbid words, has been 'friends' with Twilight Sparkle before her cutie mark exams. later when the story after chapter one / episode one, and the end of episode two / chapter two of the show starts, Sunny Olive dies by challenging Nightmare Moon but then revives sort-of by the elements of harmony, As a Zony (Zombie pony) just without the eating brains, and infected bites bit. but with a comedic side and a slice of un-life.

tl;dr version.
Sunny Olive, cant express feelings without it being morbid, friends with Twilight before her cutie mark, becomes undead (a Zony) by episode two/chapter two, but all in all, the full story is a comedic slice of un-life for Sunny Olive.