IM SO SORRY AGAIN!! · 5:25pm Nov 29th, 2012
im a horrible person for not updating, but my mind is a fickle bitch.
she may focus on son thing only to neglect the rest.
and it is with a heavy heart i must tell you that Dano has been far from my mind.
instead the lore and canon of Warhammer 40k has taken his spot.
here is a spoiler of the story Dusk Striders
a Warhammer 40/MLP cross over.
this is lightly edited, so please tell me if i missed anything.
TAG WARNING: Anthro Ponies.
Dusk Striders
Chapter 1
The Story of Man
The lonely chirp of a single cricket sounded in the calm summer night as ten colts, two fillies and one mare walked silently through a field of tall grass. The dual moons and countless stars watched and guided the party as they moved down a thin dirt path in a single file. The mare, an old teacher with her fair share of wrinkles hidden under her light purple coat, held a small lantern in her hand to push back night while her other appendage held a blue shawl closed over her small frame. Under the mare’s wool cover was a white button up shirt tucked into a long black skirt. Her silvery mane was tied into a bun, and her hooves remain uncovered as her matching tail swayed in the soft breeze. The mare slowed a bit as she turned, her yellow eyes filled with worry as she cast a watchful glance over the young ones moving in her stead.
“Move along children” called out the mare before returning her gaze forward.
Heeding their superior’s words the twelve young ponies picked up the pace despite their mutual fear. None of the twelve classmates were over the age of ten, yet they had been pulled out of bed in the middle of the night only to be rushed into their uniforms and out the door. Many had witnessed their parent’s solemn or confused expressions as their teacher took them away. Goodbyes were quick, and none knew when they would go home.
Like their teacher the children wore white button up shirts with black pants or short black skirts depending on their gender. A third of the children’s shirts had small holes cut in the back to allow small wings to poke through while another third had small horns protruding from their heads. Despite the clean uniforms the young ones were anything but organized. Some of their shirts were not tucked in while others were miss-buttoned as they moved through the night, colorful eyes constantly shifting.
The thin trail snaked its way through the field only to slowly ascend up a hill. The group moved along it quickly, their hooves pounding softly in the dark. The mare led her charges up the rise before suddenly stopping short of the crest. She turned and crouched, placing her lantern on the ground next to her.
“Come here children.”
As if on cue the twelve young ponies scrambled into a tight cluster in front of their teacher.
“You are going to meet a stallion on top of the hill. He is… important. You must do as he says.”
The mare shifted her eyes slowly over her charges making sure to create eye contact with them all.
“What does he want?” Asked one of the more bold children, a filly with a dark grey coat and wings, deep blue eyes and a short black and purple mane.
“I don’t really know Pixie, but you just need to be brave. All of you.”
The teacher gave her student’s a stern gaze to force the point, and they returned with quick nods. A small tender smile appeared on the mare’s face as she rose after grabbing her lantern.
“Now move along.”
The children slowly walked by their teacher, their group splitting to move around her like water around a rock. The mare watched them move over the hill together before letting out a sad sigh. She did not know why the letter from the Crown ordered her to collect the twelve young ones, but the fact that they were chosen by name was as much of an indication as any that they were special. With a finial wave to one of the children who lagged behind to initiate the farewell the mare began her long trek back into town.
The children moved cautiously up the incline before reaching the top. In front of them was a ring of long logs around a small campfire. The tall grass had been flattened to create a circle around the small camp, and the shadows cast by the flame danced upon those strands still standing proud on the top of the rise. A single stallion sat on one of the logs, his back to the group. He wore clean cream colored robes that ran to the ground over a tight royal purple tunic. Holes were cut in the back of both garments to allow two massive gold colored wings to lie on the stallion’s back, and a long black mane that could touch the ground floated in an unfelt breeze. Brown pants with a hole cut to release a long black tail made up the stallion’s lower body. His face was obscured as he looked up into the night as if he was counting stars.
The children approached slowly. They had never seen the stallion before, but his stature and regal bearing demanded as much respect as the young ones could comprehend. As soon as the group pierced the invisible barrier of the camp the stallion turned his head to lay his unflinching gaze upon the children. Dark hazel eyes scanned the young ones as they cringed under his stare. Like his wings the stallion’s coat was an almost shimmering gold, and his forehead supported a long horn of matching color.
“Hello children.” The stallion said with a soft yet powerful voice. “Please come sit.”
The stallion threw his legs over the log he rested on as he turned. As he did so the children moved into the camp and found seats, three to a log. For a long moment no one spoke as the fillies and colts fidgeted under the stallion’s eyes.
“I am sorry for bringing you up here so late.” apologized the stallion “I am sure you are all very tired.”
One of the colts yawned in response, and the stallion chuckled as his assumption was found correct. His laugh was like rolling thunder yet soft to the ear.
“The true reasoning for your presence will be answered shortly, but first I must tell you a story.”
The children seemed to perk up to the promise of a tale.
“A story about what?” Asked a colt with a powder blue mane, dark blue coat and wings and white eyes.
“The Story of Man.”
And here I was hoping for a new installment for the Dano series. *sigh* guess I'll have to wait and read even MORE of your fics and keep writing.
I didn't see anything major. Can't wait to read the rest!
552081 so was i, but like i said it hard to write without a complying mind
552083 if you didnt see anything major you missed out on some junk
lol
wont spoil it tho
552307 I'm having the exact opposite for my OC's fic. My mind was all like "IDEA! WRITE IT!" and that's how I wound up with 3 chapters in under 12 hours
552325 i wish that happened to me more often
552326 It's slowed down, and I think the chapters I'll be getting out for it will be more in the 4,000 to 5,000 range, but the writing process for the story is going smoothly since I take so much from my own experiences
552329 true.
mine or more fantasy based, as well as military dramas.
i do not have much experience in both
and my chapters are always 3,000+ words
3,000 is always my minimum
552334 My third chapter was over 3,000, which is where I wanted my minimum to be. The first chapter I wanted to be short, since it's an introduction to the character, but the second chapter came up I think about 400 words short since I got to a point where I was like, "Yeah, that sounds like a good place to stop for now"
552340 my first chapter is all over the place
552346 I remember. But if you had wanted it a bit more organized, you could've had the "before" part as a prologue, with the cliffhanger of him waking up to go into the "true first chapter"
552350 i meant word count wise >.>
552356 I don't mind, as long as the story is compelling. I've read books where it's like 40 page chapter, then randomly there's a chapter that's 2 pages long
552361 true, but one i hit 10,000 words its a bit too much
also do you think my first chapters are disorganized?
552373 I think that 10,000 would be around the same size of a chapter as a good book.
And as for organization, it doesn't seem disorganized to me. First chapter just felt like you didn't know what kinda pace you wanted to set, sometimes it'd be a little slow, sometimes fast. But you found the middle ground in time, so I didn't mind it at all
552383 which fic are we talking about anywho?
552386 The first one, Whole New World.
This one is alright, I don't really see much in mistakes
552393 lol
oh
okay.
that was only my second fic, and i do believe i have improved a little
552402 Like I said, pacing was all that was an issue, but you improved it in a chapter or two (idk precisely, been a while since I read that and I've been reading like crazy)
552408 i barely remember Whole New World.
lol
silly seeing as i wrote it.
552423 My problem is that I can't forget any tales that I've read or written. It's like they get stored away, and when I need them, I can recall them in a few seconds
552428 if i really tried i could recount the entire tale, but at this moment im trying to remember Warhammer 40k Lore
552458 If you're fan enough, I'm sure you won't have problems.
I'm a lifelong Star Wars fanboy and you could ask me anything about it and I'll give you the answer right away
552464 im a fan, but Warhammer is so complex.
gods, mortals and space marines.
names to remember
places to recall
its a lot to take in
552476 psh, I can speak Huttese and parts of the Sith language (it's not unlike Native American languages), and I can name out a lot of different races Too bad they don't consider Huttese or Sith to be viable languages, though. When they ask if I'm bilingual, I want to say yes, but noone understands
552489 lol.
they speak low and high gothic in Warhammer 40k
552491 I wish I had the supplies and training for metalworking. I could make a killing off of custom built lightsabers. I'm badass when there's geometry and precision, yet I suck at drawing out pretty much anything... WTF brain?
552499 i surprised myself earlier when i drew the Equestrian Guard's symbol.
552500 I surprised myself finding out I could actually draw something. I drew my seven lightsabers that I want to build for myself, and they're all named after a deadly sin ^-^
552509 lol.
i love that kind of Christian lore.
the seven deadly sins, the 9 rings of hell, the 4 horsemen.
i know most of those probably wasnt created by cristians, but srill
552513 Of course not. Neither were the 7 heavenly virtues. Or any angel names, for that matter. Nowhere in the bible does it name any angels other than Gabriel and Lucifer
But I decided on the 7 deadly sins, because, if I had the powers of the Force, you bet your ass I'd be a Sith. and I'd be the cheeriest fuckin Sith ever
552517 but that is how those myths are passed on today.
just like polythesim was the basis for ancient peoples myths and tales.
it all about the times
552521 i would def be a jedi.
im too goody two shoes to be bad
I wouldn't be able to abide by the Jedi code, it's so incorrect. Now, the Sith code, though, makes sense. Especially the first line: Peace is a lie, there is only Passion
552528 true.
i dont know if there is a "good sith"
i know that there may be a "good" chaos space marine
and he is the most bad ass guy you have ever seen
552532 You can be a Sith and keep morals, but they're all decided by you. Like, for me, I wouldn't kill any woman or child, unless the woman deserved it due to a circumstance (ex, she murdered family member), and I wouldn't feel compelled to kill any Jedi I come across. I may not like the Jedi much because of their very archaic beliefs that I'd associate with the ancient Roman Catholics, but I know that Jedi are useful as peacekeepers throughout the galaxy. Now, I would try to convert them, but through words and not actions.
Man. Tis' such a curious word. What is it to be a "Man?" What aspects could be understood? What could not be? What is it to live a life of a "Man?" Where did we come from? Where do we go once this planet we live on is done and wasted? What happens next? What happened before? Where did it all start, and how do we know we're all truly real? Man. The one word that has confused so many people, but that has been interpreted so many times in different formats. Is it truly worth it to be a "man?" Or is it only an act to move us up from our stupor? The tale of what has come, and what has passed, relived and destroyed again and again, so that the legend may live on. From ash we shall rise, and from the skies we shall fall. From the womb we are born, and from the clouds we shall dive, always intent on going six feet under. To be a man, it can be interpreted as you want. But what a man truly is... man is all of us. We are men of this universe, and shall protect those who fall, and fall with those who we protect. Survive, thrive, and explore. They, they are men. Remember, and never forget this lesson....
Aaaaaaaaaaand, that's what I thought when I read the title. THIS IS GON B EPIX!
552636 lol.
it is more of a history lesson of Warhammer 40k lore for those who do not know
552760 Watched the Ultramarines movie last night... DEAR GOD MY BRIN EXPLODED FROM TEH COOLIOSNeSS!
552818 yeah
it wasnt the best movie every, but still a nice movie
552827 For me, a noobie, that was epic, except those marines seemed like douche bags to that one person...
552832 lol.
to which person?
i have only seen random scenes of the movie
552841 ... I dunno his name. Prometius or some thing or other...
552850 what did his armor look like
....DAMN YOU JOSEPH!
its cool though
DAMN YOU!!!
552906 uhh... The norm for a Freshman Ultramarine I guess? Big and Bulky, with a Bolter? He was in the beginning fight scene with his CO.
552967 yes
damn me to hell
553053 oh
maybe because he was young.
553067 lololololol. At the end, he killed a daemon and became the new CO, lol.
553112 thats how it works