Update(s). · 5:31am Nov 29th, 2012
Right, so first off. I've been thinking this over.... And, well. My more depressive, and negative side has one here. I've decided, for the time being, to put Fallen Kingdom Chronicles of a hiatus. I've been trying to hold off on this, but... Its a huge story, and I need more help then I'm getting to get the story I want told out. So, for now? I'm putting it on hiatus. I need a good pre-reader, and a good editor. I'm going to keep writing the story, and working on fleshing it out, I may even go back and do some heavy revisions on the first two chapters. I do know, that I will be updating it, hopefully in a month or two, with 20k words waiting to be uploaded and ready to go. If I get lucky as I tend to do sometimes.
I'd like to thank everyone who has taken the time to read the story, comment, and favorited it. I wouldn't be as big of a brony now if it wasn't for you guys giving me the feeling I accomplished something for a community I hold dear to my heart. Especially Azu, who went through my first two chapters, And Sinrar who did the bucking AMAZING and badass cover art. When I finish this story, it'll be because I got that amazing cover art, magn.
On another note, since until I get more help, I won't be doing alot of writing, I'm going to have my services as a pre-reader up. I vaguely have what I do in my 'About Me' deal on my profile, so if you need any opinions, tips, or maybe some help in any of those areas, I'm available. I-
Luna: You can stop there, Dawny. That's all. Stop typing. STEP AWAY FROM THE KEYBOARD.
Right, right. Thanks, Luna.
Luna: No problem. Now, smile and wave and be cheery. If I have to deal with ANOTHER bucking depressed author for more then three minutes, Ponies are going to the sun. I don't care what they did. Ponies will be going to the sun.
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NNNOOOOOOOOOOOO :'-(
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No, no sad crying Twilight pictures to change my mind. That is cheating.
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THIS ISN'T EVEN MY FINAL FORM
Luna: I gave Dawn an xbox controller, your crying ponies are being ignored. Your move.
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MOAR CRYING PONIES
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MOAR PONIES
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p.s....don't forget to hit the reply button next time!
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Luna: I wanted to see how long it would take you to reply with out it.
And, please. You can't get alicorn princess of the night to give in with crying ponies. I win. 
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We shall resume this duel upon a pre-designated time. For now, I must be off. Got shit to do.
You can take your time if you want. Be stronger than me, and continue to write. I know you can do it.
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And it's a hiatus! That means there is still hope left!
Kindly,
~Sinrar
PS: forever...