What on earth did I just read · 7:53pm Jun 23rd, 2020
I found some more garbage on Wattpad. Take a read. I just can't with life anymore.
Here>>Just...I can't
I found some more garbage on Wattpad. Take a read. I just can't with life anymore.
Here>>Just...I can't
The title says it all
What do you expect? It’s Wattpad
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My expectations were close to none existent, but this...what is this!?
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Something that even I can't bear and try to understand. And I have a policy for sitting through any story that I began reading.
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That's a good policy.
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It is, except for cases where simply reading a story can be the worst torture I can put on myself. One such case would be the story you found.
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I think grammar and punctuation with need years of intense therapy to get over that abuse.
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Well, if the problem was only with grammar and punctuation, I would be able to bear it. But, seriously, what is it with the characters, the settings, the expositions, etc. of this story?!
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Hey Bez, want to make another Critical Critiques review?
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Hey Bez, wanna make another review, except with co-host, me? Just a weird idea I had..
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It's like people on Wattpad and not knowing anything about writing settings and character emotion. Also, in this story, Flurry is 18, but King Sombra is like 100+ years old! That's actually beyond illegal!
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Also, if I'm right, there's no Chapter 2 to this story, correct?
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Yes, thank god for that