It's the progue · 9:53am Nov 18th, 2012
Whelp, it's here. The prologue. Since your probably the only one who even read these things, iloveportalz0r how would you like to be my editor? Please answer in the comments. As for the other, I don't know, 2 or 3 people, here's the prologue. After it and chapter one has been written and edited, they will be officially posted. Insert Flutter yay.
A gentle breeze blows across the desert. I can see it blow the loose soil around. Theres grunting noises behind me, but I tune them out, so as to not ruin natures beauty. I look up. There's a full moon out tonight. Even better is that it's a blue one. Better get a good look at it, because this could be the last one I see. Pain blossoms as the butt of a shotgun slams into the side of my head and knocks me on the ground. I land on my arm and wing, more pain registering in my body. I wriggle until the pain isn't so bad, but the rope still dig's into me. I lay there watching as a pony dig's a hole in the ground. My grave.
"Mmmph. Hmmph." I yell out, trying call for help. But I know it's pointless. The gag is as firm as when they put it in and I'm rewarded with a kick to the stomach for my troubles.
"Hey boss, can we kill him? He's starting to get on my nerves."
"No. I don't know about you Pies, but I look a someone in the eye when I kill them. I'm not a fink. Dig?"
Assholes. You shoot my wing, take me, and to add insult to injury, you dig my grave right in front of me. When I get out of these ropes, I'm going to kill each of you slowly. Oh who am I kidding, I'm not going to get out of this al-"
"Boss, graves ready."
"Good. Hold him up. I want to talk to him."
I feel a tingling sensation as the unicorn jerks me up with her magic. She sets me up so that I'm on my knees in front of a clean cut unicorn in a checkered suit. He's obviously from Pegasus. I take a quick look around, burning each of them into memory. Three ponies and one griffin. Two of the ponies and the griffin are obviously Pies, just from the way they're dressed. The unicorn holding me up has a dark brown coat with a grey mane. 'That's rare, a unicorn Pie. She must either be the daughter of a respected Pie member or she's proven her worth to them.' The other pony was a Earth pony thats been hitting me and asked to kill me. He has the usual Pie tribe colors, grey coat and mane. The griffin is the one that dug the hole. He looks downtrodden and dirty. 'He must either be a slave or a chem head.'
Stepping in front of me is the Pegasus prick. He has an off white coat and a black mane. The most noticeable thing about him is that he's clean. It's such a rare occurrence in the wasteland that it took me a minute to realize it. 'Must mean that he was born looking sleazy. The jacket only makes it even more obvious.'
He floats out an object from his from his jacket pocket. A platinum chip.
"You've made your last delivery kid." He puts the chip back and pulls something else out. It's a gun. It looks like a 9mm, but not one that I've ever seen. It's a shiny silver color, stylized with a floral vine pattern. Instead of the usual special grip for ponies to hold on to it with their mouth, it's smooth. On it is a picture of Nightmare Moon, the Goddess of the Apocalypse. 'The smooth handle must mean that it was meant for unicorn or griffin use.'
All thought stops as he points it at my head.
"Sorry you got twisted up in this scene. From where you're kneeling it must seem like an 18-carat run of bad luck. But, truth is...the game was rigged from the start."
I hear a bang, then everything goes black.
>Since your probably the only one who even read these things
I try to read every blog notification, but I do not always have time
>iloveportalz0r how would you like to be my editor?
Put it on GDocs and PM me the link. The email you need to add to let me edit the document is [censored due to this comment being 48 weeks and 5 days old]
515558 We might have a problem. GDocs doesn't work for me for some odd reason. I think I pissed off our great Google overlords somehow. What else will work?
515630 Try the following:
Clear cookies from Google
Clear cache
Use a different browser
If you know of a different website that has the same stuff, you could use that
I don't know anything like that and I tried what you said. It didn't work. I even tried using Explorer. Would sending them in a message work?
517167 Huh, I never got your reply because you did not reply to my comment