The Dusk of Troubled Views · 11:10pm Feb 27th, 2020
Greetings and Salutations, my name is Wrex and this is my review. The story I'll be reviewing is the sequel to 'The Dawn of a New Mission', it's 'The Dusk of Troubled Views'. As I'm sure you all know, that story tells how Tirek, Cozy Glow, and Chrysalis are reformed by Luster Dawn. The sequel to it takes place in that timeline. The twists and surprise in this sequel are interesting enough to make your head spin. In a good way. And there's a surprising twist that's the icing on the cake. There are some grammatical errors, but it's still pretty good. I give this story a 9.5 out of 10.
It isn’t done yet, but honestly, you may not even need to update it. The story will continue with a few more twists before it ends with the confirmation of a third story. So technically, you gave away all the needed info. I am very honored. Thank you.
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(Nervous laughter) my bad. And your welcome.
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Hey. Nothing against it. Wouldn’t even care if you did it again as long as the review tells the whole story without spoiling.
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That, I can do.