I need co-writers for my stories (disown)

I seriously need some co writers to help me with my stories. And tests and that includes new content as well. I want to entertain people when writing a fanfic I really do. But considering the 1st negative comment I got, it's actually difficult. And yes it is critisism but that is not constructive.

I really need constructive critisism to help me with my stories. But if it's not constructive then it would be heard for me to continue making my content.

But dispute how Mutch it hurts me, I can still understand the problems with the stories I'm writing. But this was the 1st time I have ever been to fimfiction.

If I can fix the issues you have with my stories. Please give me some co- writers with my content.

But right now I'm fixing the grammer of 3 if the stories

Here are the links

https://www.fimfiction.net/story/421137/a-recording-of-a-missing-pony

https://www.fimfiction.net/story/421435/the-trial-of-glowy-bilts

https://www.fimfiction.net/story/421466/blog-of-the-missing

Please guys I need help improving my content and I can't do it my self