Snippet · 1:06am Oct 17th, 2018
Just a taste of what I’m writing.
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Cold, unhinged darkness, Derrick stood at the highest peak of the castle and scowled down at the Gorger as it spat Celestia’s crown onto the desolate town that suffered their battle. The beast’s laughter after removing the crown from his maw, ignited a new found emotion inside the young lord for all to watch.
“Derrick?” Nightmare Moon flew closer to her love, but a sudden gust of dark magic infused wind and a violent aura threw her away.
Derrick’s fists shook and bled, his body fueled by the newfound hatred.
“You.......YOU!”
The bottled up anger exploded, as did his magic, and he leaped off the tower. Like a missile on its path of destruction, Derrick roared, a deep, echoing voice booming behind his.
“YOU’RE GONNA PAY!”
Blinding, what the townsfolk thought the be thunder, was none other than their dark lord’s fist colliding with the monster, and the burning memory of his expression.
“Derrick.....” Sombra paused in shock. He knew before everyone else that it happened and smiled after collecting himself.
A sleeping giant most would assume, but Sombra saw that a slumbering god had just awoken.
“I’M GOING TO KILL YOU!!
No I love this story but please don't kill Celestia. I actually like how you made her in this world(the real one) and I don't want to be reading that she died. If she does dye can their be a warning or something?
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Season of darkness
About time been waiting for this for so long.
I'm honestly looking forward to this as I really enjoyed your stories but please don't kill the real Celestia. She has been through enough bullshit to last a life time and the fact she is going to possibly die would be like giving the ultimate middle finger to someone who really doesn't deserve it.
If you do kill her I'd suggest reviving her later on or at least have her brought back in some form. This would cushion the blow and make a lot of people less angry at you and trust me, angry fans are scary fans.