Update

Attention all pony viewers- please favorite or watch me to get the newest exclusive stories! I will be making mini-bits too; (short, funnier versions of stories).

Scratch that. Brony-bits, isn't it better?

PLEASE READ

We're doing awesome things and my whole team too. Request a story on my blog, send it, and the wish is yours. I'm really running out of ideas, since everyone in fimfiction is stealing them lol- so any ideas, any character ideas, and sometimes, even contests: which you get to be one of my OC models or make your own OC and be able to send it to me. (Make them really special.)

I'm also making a new movie - "Twilight" Sparkle

Movie cover:

Haha!

Comments

[OminousBrony]

Is it this Blog or some other blog you have that I post a request for.

[DeadlyRose]

11396 You can do it here.

Oh By the way, from my story (Apple of The Eye) was there anything I rushed on too quickly? I would like to fix that.

So.... What's your request? The more you watch me, the more inspiration. Right now, I really don't have much- just one buddy. I'll watch you back if you don't mind.

[DeadlyRose]

11396 You can do it here.

Oh By the way, from my story (Apple of The Eye) was there anything I rushed on too quickly? I would like to fix that.

So.... What's your request? The more you watch me, the more inspiration. Right now, I really don't have much- just one buddy. I'll watch you back if you don't mind.

[DeadlyRose]

11457 Guess you already are watching me. So... Do you write fanfics? Or do you read them?

Just a personal quiz. It's a hobby. :)

[OminousBrony]

Read them. Though I am currently working with a writer to produce several fics write now as well as pre-read for another 2. I don't really have a writers mindset. The writer I am working with however says I have more of a producer mindset. I can come up with ideas and that, but am terrible at writing them out.

And almost the entire chapter of your fic seems a bit overly rushed. I can't really poitn out a specific spot as it is all over the place. But the one that sticks out the most is with Twilight and the Moon guy.

[DeadlyRose]

11471 So tell me.... Should I remove any parts? Or add more details to the before events in a chronological order?
I'm only 10. :)