Revisions · 2:02am Oct 24th, 2012
Chapter 7 (The Ponish Inquisition) of Stacking Stones has just been reworked for clearer dialogue.
This means a departure from the previous format I used of small chunk paragraphs.
However, this also makes it much easier to read the dialogue.
It is likely the story will stick to this format from this point on due to the increase in spoken interactions between characters.