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Scourge21


Pretty chill guy who's on here for fun, but if I post something, just give me feedback please. That's all I ask

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  • 233 weeks
    Reign Update

    Hey guys and gals! Scourge here, How are all of you feeling? Anywho, I will like to say thank you to all of you who are reading my HIE story Reign. I know some of you dislike but not really telling me what's wrong with it. The most criticism I've gotten is that I'm too wordy, repetitive, and I have a few typos here and there. Other than that, most people are starting to enjoy my story. Now the

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  • 239 weeks
    New Book

    Hello everyone, guess who's back from the dead! It is I, Scourge21 and I come bringing good news. Today I've decided to post my new HIE story, but I will put out only the first chapter if the administration approves the story. I know some of you guys barely comment on my blogs but I would really like some feedback on this. Once I post the first chapter I want you guys to go crazy with the

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  • 268 weeks
    Types of POV

    Hey wonderful people of fimfiction, was just wondering on rather to use first person or third person in my human story. Can you guys help me out? What pov do you think is best for a HIE story? First or Third person?

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  • 330 weeks
    Happy Holidays

    Merry Christmas/Happy Hanukkah/etc...

    Whatever holiday you celebrate I just wanted to say merry Christmas to everyone who follows me. Also what's your favorite thing to do during this time, mine is to watch Christmas specials and help out around the kitchen. One more thing to, what's your all time favorite Christmas special. Mines the ed edd n eddy Christmas special.

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  • 330 weeks
    Almost Christmas

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Nov
28th
2017

Story Preview #1 · 4:21am Nov 28th, 2017

Hey guys it's me again and I would like to say that I'm halfway done with the first half of my new human story that I wanted to release in the summer but couldn't. Anyway, here's a little preview. Hope you enjoy it and I'll see you guys next time, piece.

In a dark room stood four silhouettes. One of the silhouettes was Princess Celestia, who has bruising all around her body, a broken wing, and a black eye. The other three silhouettes were a dragon, a griffin, and a zebra.

The dragon was Dragon Lord Torch, the griffin was Prime minister Gryffindor 3rd, and the zebra was Prince Tachala. They were called by Celestia for this meeting about what had happened.

"Princess, why have you called us here knowing that we have more important matters than this." Torch said getting the other two to nod in agreement.

"Also, what happened to you? You look like you've seen and been in a war." Gryffindor said as the other two agreed to how Celestia looks.

Celestia looks at Prince Tachala to see if he'll say something to contribute to the conversation but he doesn't.

"All will be explained during this meeting. What I'm about to show you must not leave this room." Celestia said as she begins to cough a bit. She then projects a screen with the bit of magic she has left.

The screen shows Celestia's mother and father standing next to the royal guard and a younger Starswirl as they seem like they're waiting for something as a portal opens up.

"The first ever magical surge to ever happen back then. The portal had contained a unknown magic at the time but was later out to be a reality warping spell. Something came through the portal".

The screen changes to show a very menacing looking being wearing all black standing next to Celestia's mother and father while holding a five-year old Celestia and four-year old Luna. The three royals were very intrigued by this creature that they have never seen as the screen changes to show the creature using strange weapons at a hydra.

"Him. The first ever human to ever come to Equestria."

Everyone in the room were quite surprised to hear the word 'human' since they only had heard of them in old stories told by their ancestors.

"Is this some kind of joke? And if it isn't, then how come we haven't heard of this until today". Tachala said as all three of them glare at Celestia suspiciously.

"That is because of the secret organization that my father created to keep him a secret.  Project Harmony, as he called it". Celestia said as she looks back at the three who were still staring at her.

"Alright we understand the secrecy of this but why are we really here? Cause I didn't come here for a history lesson". Torch said as the other two agreed to this.

"It's because of....him". Celestia changes the screen changes to show a different but similar creature who was fighting off her army, defeating the mane six, Princess Cadence and Luna, including a picture of her being held up as she was being choked by this human as she played out his voice so that they could hear him.

"I want you to remember this day, it's a reminder of what'll happen if any of you get in my way and excuse me of something I didn't do. I want you to remember, Celestia...In all the years to come... in your most private moments... I want you to remember my hand at your throat... I want you to remember the one man who beat you." The human said as they see him punch Celestia down to the ground and walk off.

As soon as that happened, Celestia turns on the light as she sees the shocked faces of her colleagues.

Torch was shocked out of his mind, even though he's a very powerful dragon, he lost to her in a arm wrestling match. So seeing her getting beaten down surprised him and the rest of them in there.

That's when Tachala stood up and walked over to Celestia's side and picks up the file that she had in her hands and opened it. It was a picture of the human next to the princesses and the mane 6.

"So what is his name?" Tachala ask as he looks  up at Celestia as Torch and Gryffindor also want to know.

Celestia was a little hesitant but had built up the confidence to say his name.

"His name is...Zero."

Also one more thing, I'll be also changing the title of my story again because I just don't think it fits for what I'm planning for this story.

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