New Story waiting for approval.

So I have a story called My Life as an Eldritch Horror that's currently awaiting approval. It's the first of my fanfics I've written to be converted to digital and posted (Computer issues meant I've had to write old fashioned pen and paper style). I hope people like it. It's about a guy who wakes up as a tentacled horror. I'm trying to go for a reverse-tentacle monster concept.

"Hey you're a tentacle monster, so have you ever..."
"Nope nope nope nope nope! No thank you! Not interested!"
"Come on... it'll be-"
"That's it, I'm leaving."
"Hey wait come back!"

"Is that tentacled thing being chased by Lyra?"
"Yep looks like it."

"Get back Here!"
"I don't wanna! Leave me alone!"