Oct
3rd
2012
I NEED HELP!! · 11:31pm Oct 3rd, 2012
look, the prologue to Brothers was filled with flaws. I need an editor, plot ideas, character development advice, ANY help that doesn't involve taking the story down, canceling it, or removing one of the twins from the story.
HELP ME WRITE A BETTER STORY!!
"Celestia's Brothers" has the potential to be GREAT, but I need help getting it there. I have ideas, but I need collaborators to help turn the story's like-to-dislike ratio around, and possibly even make it a featured story. If you think you can help, either send me a private message or comment the area in which you would like to help.
Thanks very much to anyone willing to assist, every bit helps.
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CaptainSanchez · 178 views
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Try Author Support, Proofreading Prereading and Editing, Proofreaders and People Willing to Proofread, or my own group Love and Tolerate.
I would LOVE to help you out with your story. Besides, reading your story inspired me to work on making my own ones.
400850 wonderful, could you suggest some better names for Terrestrion and Aquinus? I'm not quite happy with those.
I can see how those names wouldn't be easy to accept. Those names do sound more like they would be greek gods. Well, how about for Aquinus something like Purade (referencing to aqua pura) and Valos(vale, a poetic word for valley) for Terrestrion?
400976 hm... Valos sounds like it would be rather easily misconstrued for a Skyrim reference, and Purade, well, I think that's a drink. What do you think of Vallion (a combination of Valley and Stallion) and Dolphino?
Right, it was just an idea to pitch. We can go with yours.
well, thanks for not giving an opinion. I really hate when I ask someone what they think of something and they ACTUALLY TELL ME.