Help!!! · 9:04am Feb 1st, 2017
I have a few things to get of my chest.
As you maybe know, I'm jobless for over a year now and dispte my best efforts nothing has changed yet and it drives me to the edge of a mental breakdown. The fire that currently burns inside me gets fueled with anger about every day that passes without any major changes or any messages that the docs and other stuff finally found something suitable for me.
And because, of the above named reasons, I finally wrote the first chapter of the mature side story to 'The Rise of Metal'. It around 2.000 words long, but it is in no shape to be published yet. So if anybody can help me with editing or has some tips and tricks for me how to get 'flow' in a story, please help me!! I really don't want to let this go to waste. :/
