Finally starting on chapter one revision a week later than planned... whups?

For those of you who were anticipating the continuation of Crumbling Meteorite I want to apologise for not posting a link to the work in progress document in my google docs as I promised to ^^;

*this is where i'd usually lament a long time about why and such*

BUT HERE IS THE LINK INSTEAD! =D!!!

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1EItKiqjvxW9zhjL9xXfARDJUWZJEX0mcxMOKmEzXgtE/edit

If you find me writing while you're taking a look, feel free to drop a comment via the top right! ^^

remember~ Red text is part of the old version, I'm keeping it there to copy paste certain bits I want to keep and only change some of the names and titles.

For those of you who enjoy proofreading, it would be a tremendous help if you leave a comment or two to this blog with any corrections or advice you may come up with ^^

I hope to finish it as soon as possible ^^ i wanna get to the fun parts i've got in store >=3

Toodles!

Comments

[Citpo]

Yup a good improvement from your previous version I have to admit. You're getting quite good at this now and I can;t wait for your next ACTUAL chapter =P