Progress on Dawn Chapter 3 and A Minor Revision to Chapter 1

So I've finally found my rhythm and I've set myself a deadline. The chapter will be released by Friday the 28th of September.

Writing this chapter was quite a challenge to begin with due to a significant change in tone for the next two chapters. There's some dark stuff to come, so hang onto your hats, this should be fun. Also, I've got some nice character development set up. In other words, emotional confrontation, one of my favourite themes.

Also, a previously butch female earth pony with a light yellow coat and a strawberry mane in chapter 1 is no longer such a colour. She was not meant, nor ever meant to be Applebloom and that small mistake has been corrected accordingly.