someone please tell me that this crap i wrote when i was younger is awful

Celestia,

What have I done wrong?

When the stars begin to dim,

and my eyes begin to water,

my luck is wearing thin,

You're gone and I've begun to falter.

I've surrendered to my misery,

this hole I can't climb out of.

All that's left is memory,

And your sun that shines dimly above.

It's hard for me.

That's crystal clear,

crystals that fall from my eyes.

Everyone begins to see.

It's something I can't quite understand,

This feeling I have inside.

It's as if the all the clouds in the sky,

Have just decided to land.

And land inside, deep in my soul.

My eyes are dark,

As black as coal.

I have died,

Along with you,

Melted into the sky,

As all these years creep by.

My friends are beyond concerned,

As I sit here alone,

In the castle you helped me obtain.

I write this in the hospital.

The insane hospital.

I killed Luna today.

So she could be with you.

I know where you're going.

You've already gone.

I know where I'm heading.

I know that I'm not wrong.

The moon has left the sky,

The stars have not aligned.

All my fears are coming,

Coming into one.

I silently closed the scroll. I tied the black ribbon around it. I closed my eyes. I let go of it. It blew in the wind and carried itself up, up, up towards the clouds. As I stood on the roof of the hospital, I grinned. Grinned at my work. Grinned at the bloody corpses I had freshly killed. To get up here. And send her a final note.