Slowpoke.

As the name says I am going a bit slowpoke on the chapters. I try including an other easier way to place dialogs with much more sense on who's talking and to who.

Example :

[<Name> <A plus : Accent , tone , bonus emote.>] : "<Dialog.>

And maybe add a little color once I start to redo the rest of the chapters and some pictures for a small detail.

I work on the next chapter ASAP and post it when I'm finished.