interesting

So I improved my grammar and spelling a bit. Granted it isn't much. But apparently my story is readable now and hopefully with some eye drops you can keep the burning at bay.
It's a good story I promise. Yes there hasn't been much in the ways of gore yet and it seems more like a slice of life with a human in it. But that's because he's just getting to know the mane 6 right now. Things will heat up in the next few chapters so don't worry. That epic battle I thought of is coming.