This is going to take a while since I've hardly finished planning the first few scenes in script form. But I have characters and a story so can't be too hard right... Right?
Could someone read through it and tell me what they think? It's rated M due to intense violence later on in the story so make sure view mature is on if you decide to take a look.
What would you like help on? Ideas I have, but without something to work off of, I'm afraid they might not be as helpful as they could be.
-Ru