This is going to take a while since I've hardly finished planning the first few scenes in script form. But I have characters and a story so can't be too hard right... Right?
Could someone read through it and tell me what they think? It's rated M due to intense violence later on in the story so make sure view mature is on if you decide to take a look.
I was proofreading but have failed to finish, I am taking longer than expected on my first story and i've lost my creative flare: can't draw and my writing has gone south.