Sanity

Hello everypony,
I decided to have you ponies to read my story that I am writing. It's not pony related.
My story is called Sanity
If I had to categories this story I would said: Dark, Adventure, Teen, A little bit of Mystery.

Here is a basic summery of this story.
In a small town of Blakewater, insanity is a disease and can easily contaminate people. Evelyn Spot, a fifteen year old, goes around trying to find out the truth of what the doctors and nurses that the insane asylum are hiding. The only problem is people see her as insane. Will Evelyn beat the insanity of this small town or will insanity take over her mind?

Now this is a working progress. So don't expect it to be perfect. There will most likely be spelling and grammar mistake. Please point them out nicely and I'll go fix them. I'm also not finished with chapter 4 yet. But before I continue writing I just want to make sure that my readers would like to read something like this.

Here are a few questions that I usually ask when people read my stories. If you want you can reply to the questions.
1- What do you think of the characters?
2- What do you think of the pacing?
3- Do you like it/hate it?
4- Is there any parts you like/dislike?

Ok I think you ponies want to read my story. I'll be looking forward to what you say about it.
With that here is the link to my story.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1n2nwFhlsawcn_nVdeqpJToIRTBDcdlfB8N4sUDSOgVY/edit