New new story! · 4:06am Jun 8th, 2016
So. This is always how it begins, isn't it. You pull out the blog form to talk about your new story, but you have no idea where to begin. I suppose the very first thing to say is I have a new story. It's called Angel's Day Out. Umm, I wrote it a while back by accident, around November 23rd, 2014, which when I looked it up was in between Season 4's finale and Season 5's premiere. When I originally wrote it, I was taking some advice from other good authors I've met who advised me to just start writing. Write whatever comes to mind, and just go with it, and do not, I repeat do not leave the chair for any reason.
So I took their advice. I didn't know at the time that it would turn up to be a story about Fluttershy's pet rabbit Angel, but soon, when I started writing, they appeared. I realize that Rainbow Dash seemed out of character at the beginning, and I vowed I would go back and edit it whenever possible. *Sigh.* But then Life caught up with me, and I somehow got convinced that playing video games and procrastinating would be much better uses of time than otherwise.
After that, I had always contemplated over whether or not to post it, and finally, yesterday, I got up the courage to post it. By this point, my thoughts on the subject had diminished, and honestly, I felt like I was reading my own writing for the first time, when I was editing it last night! So much stuff needed to be done just to post a story on here. I finally have a broader understanding of what my favorite authors have to deal with!
I mean, not to complain, but how do you include a brief description to a story that doesn't exist yet? I tried my best in making it interesting, but to be honest, it just needs a lot of work done with it.
And that is where I leave with you. This has been my first story posted on here, the moderator graciously allowed it through on its first go. I do not know what exactly drew you to my story in the first place, and that's what troubles me. In order to improve my work, and make my current story (and potential future stories better, depending on how this works out) I need to know what you're thinking. How can I improve? What typos or mistakes do you see that I do not? Do you have any advice for the story? By expressing these opinions, you will develop a deeper understanding for the story itself, and I in turn will be able to potentially improve.
I appreciate all the help you will provide! 
