Descriptions about my own OCs Part 1 - 1/2

Finally, I have put my descriptions on my first two OCs: Lightsky Onyx and Celestial Crystal

Lightsky Onyx – a white Pegasus stallion with a dark blue and pale blue streaks of his mane. His cutie mark represents a lightning sky next to an onyx. He can be a bit arrogant, but he most of all, kind and humble and help of those who are in need. He has the courage, confidence and bravery to help his parents, his friends when they are in trouble, includes with his brother, Shadow Light but sometimes he can be alone. His favorite talent is to become a best flyer. He does not want to join in the Wonderbolts only for his own interest around Ponyville. He has many talents like community organizer and a singer. He met a beautiful young earth pony named Celestial Crystal after he saved her from falling to the waterfall. He deeply falls in love with Vanilla after on a date.
His Equestria Girls counterpart is also the same as the pony counterpart, only difference is that he has a short hair. He wears a white shirt with his cutie mark, blue jeans and red sneakers. His talents are athlete, community organizer and a singer.

Snowflake Crystal/Celestial Crystal – a female white-vanilla cream colored young unicorn pony with a violet and white streaked mane. Her cutie mark represents a shiny crystal gem with a music note and a balloon. Her talents are musician, singer, party organizer and fashion designer. She is kind, generous and lovely who is also brave. Sometimes she can be a bit afraid, scared and nervous because she might be scared of rivers and heights even dangerous animals. While she was walking alone to a river to see the beautiful view, she falls off into the river and was saved by a Pegasus pony, Lightsky Onyx. Later, she asked Onyx to go on a date with her. After all of a hangout, she deeply falls in love with him. She can sing a song for her beloved boyfriend. When Lightsky Onyx feels alone, she could always come and help him to cheer up.
Her Equestria Girls counterpart is also the same as her pony counterpart. Differences is that she has a long hair without any hair clips. She wears a violet singlet with a black jacket, a third-quarter blue blouse, white sneakers, a white band and a shiny ear ring.

So what do you think about them, are they good or bad? Comment for any changes that I can fix. This is just my first time making them but I'm might be lazy to draw them because sometimes it's difficult to draw a vector and color them. Also note that I've changed the first name of Vanilla to Celestial because there are too many users who took the name Vanilla.

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