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Garfield23


Well I'm Garfield23 and I'm another Scottish Brony. Writing stories is one of my favourite hobbies.

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  • 67 weeks
    First Update of 2023

    The more time that goes on the more I let myself down, I'm not sure if anyone even cares about this story anymore but the chapter I planned to honour my friend is just too painful to even start, so I've placed the story on Hiatus, I might get back to it but I ain't promising. I've decided to start a new project but only so I'm staring at a blank screen when I try...it'll be another crossover but

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  • 85 weeks
    Update

    I think about this Story every day since I've tried to finish it but getting past round one and I am tempted to do a small flash forward between chapters, maybe trying to cover each duel in the tournament was unrealistic but I want the input of those still interested in the story. I still plan to have a chapter dedicated to the memory of a friend of mine but I've spend so much time trying to

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  • 115 weeks
    I wish I didn't have to say this but it's time for good new bad news(Good for some but not for me)

    Okay first things first, the good news is good I've been working on Chapter 15 while on a trip away from Wednesday 23rd to Monday and finally made progress. So it'll be ready soon but Tuesday had some horrible news for me, the news being some of the worst I've ever received so I'm going to put the bad news in a spoiler(You don't have to read it if you don't want to but it will be mentioned in

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  • 139 weeks
    Update on all My shBEEPt

    So first off....Tournament of Dueling fun....I'm burned out. No two ways to put it, I've decided that I may have no choice but to do a time skip since all the key players are already through to round 2 and some ideas I have for later chapters may only work now. However I've decided to take a break and come back to it.

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  • 150 weeks
    Okay time for an UPDATE!

    And aren't I lucky that I have to explain this....uhhhhhhh uhhhhh okay! I got this. I know this tournament thing was suppose to be purely Yugioh cards but I've been considering a small plot twist(British kind of small meaning I mean REALLY BIG!) where the next rounds are different forms of competition(With the Zenos basically changing their minds....oh come on it's not that ridiculous those two

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Mar
26th
2016

Season 6 Opening · 11:04pm Mar 26th, 2016

I'm going to start by saying I'm not stuck on the season 6 opener. Now for those of you who know, there was one part that made my jaw drop because it's been the complaint I've been preaching since I became a Brony, Twilight's parents, I've been begging, yelling and groaning over how they should be involved and I finally got what I wanted but that doesn't excuse the opening. Now I did like large parts like Shining Armour getting some development, Interesting Crystal Ponies, Starlight Glimmer/Sunburst friendship (I think I might write a ship fic on that one) and Pinkie Pie making me laugh my head off. However I found the episodes head scratching and at some parts annoying, Flurry Heart being 90% of my annoyance, seriously they didn't name her till the end of the second episode....bull and the other 10% goes to Twilight....now I like Twilight but oh my god, she couldn't be more annoying in this episode and sadly I can't put my finger on why she was annoying, she just was.

There was that line about Luna and Celestia, not knowing about Baby Alicorns, okay back-story now, writers you better come up with a backstory damn quickly for Celestia and Luna because that suggests they're more like Twilight and Cadence than we thought, it also suggests our worst fears of Twilight outliving her friends maybe a very real possibility now, that line (in my books) has done more damage than the writers were thinking. Flurry Heart being an alicorn was....I don't know...off putting.

So now onto my summarising thoughts. I'm going to give points to characters I feel did a good or bad job, I won't mention character if I feel indifferent.

Spike gets Plus 5, really supportive and I think he did a great job

Starlight Glimmer gets plus 5, Loved her story with Sunburst and I hope we get to see friendship develop to love between the two.

Sunburst gets plus 5, Same reason as Starlight.

Applejack gets plus 4, that cot was great

Rarity gets plus 4, really very funny

Pinkie Pie gets Plus 4, very funny too.

Shining Armour gets plus 3, finally some development

Cadence gets plus 3, yeah same as your husband keep it up!

Rainbow Dash gets plus 1, well done on the gift

Fluttershy minus 3, sorry what did you do?

Twilight minus 5, why, what and how?

Flurry Heart minus 10, You couldn't be more annoying if you said "Misa is pelosa!"

So the episode in my mind can be split into two. The first being Starlight and Sunburst's story, which I would give a 9 out of 10 and I really hope we get to see Sunburst and Starlight become more than friends. The second is Flurry Heart and the Ice age thing....boring, couldn't care less and that gets 5 out of 10. So I'll add them together and divide them in two to get 7 out of 10. So here's to season 6...not hopeful on this one.

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