Editors, artists, and a promise! Oh my! · 9:19pm Mar 20th, 2016
So I've made a few hollow promises, saying the first chapter would be out soon and it isn't. Well, it is finished and ready but i sorta wanted to release it with some cover art and i'm not sure if I will get that. I might have to find a new artist or just use a picture from deviant art. I also finished the second chapter. It's not edited, so I need a new editor if anypony is intrested. My previous editor has a new job and new duties, that I wish him luck with.
Can't wait to release the first chapter. XD whenever that happens. Anyways, to whoevers listening below i have the outlines for my story if you are intrested in editing it.
Happy lazy ass sunday.
So here is the first chapter of my story: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1IKJM0_2-fa3SMB5FR9Csa33ikyA_tKhIIAjAhY-fGe4/edit?usp=sharing
It's not what I want to be edited but it gives context to the story.
This is the second chapter: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1rFuTxJ-5YnCn5zu9Uu7if1IWxlezSRVPetgBywb7uio/edit?usp=sharing
I'm looking for an editor to edit this chapters and future chapters to come.
It's an adventure with a hint of comedy, romance and some darker themes (maybe). I also plan on having a clop, but i'm not sure if it should be separate from the story, with separate editors.
A Brief Summary:
Anyways, it's called Children Of Woe, and it’s centered around Celestia ( main character ), Luna, Discord, Sombra and Chrysalis. It takes place in the late future as Twilight and the rest of the elements of harmony begin to die off.
Celestia and the others are forced to come together to defeat a common threat to equestria and the universe. The story has a lot of flashbacks to showcase how they came to be and why they have the powers they do. along with an underlying plot about their close bond and their inevitable destiny together. Which I can go into more detail about if need be.
What I Need Help With:
I need an editor who can help me with story flow and pacing. I would love to bounce around some ideas, as well as have some help with grammar. although it's not a top priority, i can do some touch ups on grammar before i post it if spelling isn't your thing.
I don't plan on posting the chapter in till i get the cover art, hope that's not an issue.
If you are interested comment (Obvi XD) or PM me .
Hugs and kisses,
Sabrina