Warpony 4k reorganization · 2:18am Jan 25th, 2012
Hello, all nine of you who are tracking this. I feel I should make an announcement regarding Warpony.
Chapters 1-2 will be basically rewritten. They will have a similar plot, but be told in a different way. As in, worth rereading and not just making dialogue less awkward or something.They may be combined.
Chapter 3 will be re-released as I have gotten it reviewed and I just need to edit it. Will be released the same day as the new chapters 1 and 2.
Just one more thing: What do you think of the info dumps? Are they interesting? Are they annoying/hard to get through? Should I keep doing them or should I try to get the background information across through dialogue or something (which would probably be even more awkward, the info dumps would be more effective and higher quality than passive telling/showing if I am accurate about my own abilities)
Well I'm a little new to giving out suggestions to writers of fanfics and stuff, but since I've read a bunch of other fanfics before and currently trying to make up my own, I'd suggest try and make info dumps short and sweet, like either from just adding notes at the end of the chapter if they are like definitions or just simple facts that aren't exactly important enough to know right off the bat or something like that. Either way, I usually like short and sweet since I have ADHD and lose focus if there is too much to read, but eh, that's just me. Do whatever you think it good and try to do your best and stuff.
Anywho your story is awesome and I will patiently wait for more chapters