Feb
25th
2016
Ive Been Thinking · 4:52pm Feb 25th, 2016
Hey everyone uh.... ive been thinking, well of my story really so..... i was thinking of rewriting the whole thing. Cause really its just got out of hand i mean a half-demon? really? So ive been thinking of rewriting the story to the original thing i was thinking of which was originally a drama with sad moments and more down to earth type style to it, Fang was originally going to have multiple personality disorder where he was also going to have three more characters in his head that would come out in different problems. Anyway i was thinking this a bit and don't know if i should do it, so im asking you guys do you think its a good idea?
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Tiberia Silverfang · 158 views
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ok before you do anything drastic, I think should just redo it back to the point in which he found out about his half demonness and make it MPD instead, or just go back and edit out the demon and put in that.
3776765 I don't know man, i feel like my story just got completely out of hand, here was the original idea Fang was still greaving over his family's death, he moves to Canterlot and does not want anyone near him even lashing out at people, he would have to deal with a mental disorder and try to keep it in check, but i don't know man.
3776771 I think that you should go with whatever you think is right Tiberious it's your story after all.
3776780 I know Lunar, i just feel like the whole story just got completely out of hand and i just don't know what to do.
3776771 Well the way I see it, is its like performing a removal surgery, you target the threat, remove it, and move on. You don’t kill the patient and revive them and hope they live. But its up to you, if you need help redoing it I’ll be more than glad to help
3776788 Thanks Celtic, i just need some time to think and i will tell everyone, as well thank you man.
3776789 no problem, take all the time you need
3776795 Thanks again man, as well I know man I will tell everyone my decision later.
3776797 well were all here for you, im sure you'll make the right decision
3776821 Thanks guys, as well i hope i make the right decision on this.
And I think you should develop Indigo more, cuz we never saw the atheletic, tomboyish, competetive and somehow Rainbow Dash-ish personality of Indigo that we saw in Friendship Games. In your story, you made her look like she was just a weak normal girl, not gonna lie.
3777258 Hey its your opinion and also another reason i am remaking the story, did not stick to what the characters personality are as well the story just got out of hand and just want to make it how i originally wanted to make it as a more down to earth slice of life drama.