Update

So sorry I haven't been on recently, I've just been feeling a bit down. I'll probably get back to writing in a week or so, so don't worry!

Comments

[Bad Dragon]

I just would like tips on how I can improve.

It's dangerous to write alone. Here, take these:
http://auto-reviewer.appspot.com
http://www.reverso.net/spell-checker/english-spelling-grammar
http://www.onlinecorrection.com
http://www.spellcheck.net/
http://www.slickwrite.com
http://www.paperrater.com/free_paper_grader
http://www.writersdiet.com/WT.php
http://hemingwayapp.com
http://www.polishmywriting.com/
http://spellcheckplus.com/
http://www.grammarcheck.me/
https://app.grammarly.com/

[CrystalTheUnicorn]

3845336 oh, thank you so much!