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Knowledge


Prereader, Editor, Cowriter, and Writer. My background is philosophy and accounting. My stories include heavy use of allusions, drama, and foolish ponies.

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  • 343 weeks
    It has been two years but I am back!

    I have been doing a lot of editing lately. One writer even gave me an opportunity to co-write for them. Inspired by all the work I have been doing, I gotten into writing my own stories again. This one is short, but I think you will all love it. The story is very me.

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  • 437 weeks
    The Frustration of Writing without Feedback

    I am sure we all written stories which have gotten likes and dislikes without comments to explain them. With only those for feedback, you become uncertain as what you did to deserve either. The longer the story becomes, the greater the frustration becomes of what has earned the respect or ire of your readers. This is doubly confusing if you are rewriting your story from the ground up and start

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  • 437 weeks
    Timeline and Glossary for The Pony Dialogues

    This chapter provides the basic information about the world of The Pony Dialogues to make reading and understanding the story easier. That being said, you don't have to read this to understand what is going on. The Prologue also repeats a significant portion of this information.

    Main Continent Time Line before the Cataclysm

    Years before Present

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  • 437 weeks
    Genre Take: Tragedy

    Tragedy is about making a mistake that leads to great misfortune in the end. The misfortune must be a direct consequence of the hero making the wrong decision. We also should be able to humanize the reason why the hero made the wrong choice. When a hero kills the princess to take the throne, we should sympathize with the ambition that drives with the hero, but also recognize what they did was

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Jan
12th
2016

Tips for Writing MLP-Fanfiction: Naming Conventions · 2:12am Jan 12th, 2016


If you are going to write a fanfiction based on someone else's work, understanding that work is fairly essential. I have read hundreds of fanfiction, and there are a lot of blind spots in even the most detail-oriented stories on the internet. This is especially true of MLP-fanfiction where writers will focus almost entirely on the show how characters behave but never really on why and how. I decided in response to these blind spots to create a few helpful tips to help writers understand the world of Equestria better. The goal of this is not to say one cannot break the rules and conventions displayed in the show but rather point them out.


Almost every fanfiction includes a few original characters in the mix even if they are for short scenes. The writer has to figure out the purpose of these original characters have for the plot and richness of the setting, and then decide on their name and appearance. Writers go through all this trouble creating characters that they don't actually pay attention to how and why characters have their names. It is important to note that there are different rules for ponies than for non-ponies.

First, let us start with ponies. It would be easy to just say that ponies have names that relate to their Cutie Marks, but not only is that reductive, it isn't the whole truth. Ponies get their names from their personality and their position.

For example, the name 'Twilight Sparkle' has less to do with the Cutie Mark than its theme. In the first episode, we are introduced to three important ponies. First is the main character Twilight, and then are the two royal pony sisters Celestia and Luna. Celestia of the Day, Luna of the Night, and so the name Twilight fits the thematic. If we go further, we can look at the other princess's protege: Celestia's former student Sunset Shimmer and Twilight's new student Starlight Shimmer. 'Sunset Shimmer' is basically two loose synonyms for 'Twilight Sparkle'. 'Starlight Glimmer' is a hybrid where the first name ends with 'Light' like 'Twilight' and the last name is another synonym.

Back in 2013 when I was writing a fanfiction, I wrote another character following this theme named Evening Glimmer who was also a former student of Celestia's. I did not expect Starlight Glimmer, so this gave me interesting implications for their relationship to one another.

When creating a non-pony characters, the general rule is to make the name alliterate with the character's species: Gilda and Gustav the gryphons, Chrysalis the changeling, Discord the draconequs, Mulia Mild the mule, and Doodle the Donkey.

This isn't always the case, there are plenty of important non-pony characters that don't alliterate: Iron Will the Minotaur, Matilda (who is apparently a donkey, not a mule), Spike the Dragon, Little Strongheart and Chief Thunderhooves the Buffalo, and Daisy Jo and Mooriella the cows.

There are plenty of drawbacks from always alliterating and following a theme with non-ponies. For instance, how many bug-related names start with C that can be used for changelings? I recommend for changelings taking one of the naming themes, going for bug-related names like Thorax and Buzz or alliterating names like Cherish and Concern.

There are other issues to address with names, but I will leave it here. If you have any questions, I will happily answer them. The next post in this series will address Cutie Marks.

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