Daughter of Discord Chapter 17 · 3:21am Dec 20th, 2015
Chapter 17:Misunderstanding
So the reason this is late is because I kind of didn't want to read this story after the last chapter on what happen so umm...Misunderstand so what does Discord finally find out that he a idiot?
No Screwball does, there is one thing I really don't like is the writing and the use of the words there is one moment where Dinky just flat out says you're not my friend. This can be a really good scene and for the most part it is. But the way it worded it seems like oh we need to get to the final battle blah, blah, blah.
This is where I start thinking that only Bride of Discord is good because Daughter of Discord reminds me of Star Wars II Attack of The Clones and remember how bad that was? Don't you just hate sand? But at the same time it tries it best to be a good moment and I can say it had a good idea and you can really see it but it doesn't work.
So the mane six have brains are able to think as Discord is far to mad to even think about anything and turn Equestria into his own Chaos Kingdom with Screwball and Zancy with The Changeling behind it all. So after getting back at Gold Digger and Silver Tray and getting burn on my own page. How could you Jade you brought up that Piano again! It hit my evil twin brother that I didn't know I had that turn into a ghost then a doll and now trap in my t.v werid.
So chaos is used around Equestria it Christmas - no Phoenix, I'm sorry I just can't wait fir Christmas my joy is jumping up and down. But I haven't unleash my love for Christmas yet. So Equestria is covered in chaos and the girls are going to use the elements the end back to counting down the days of Christmas!!!
But does anyone read these I'm starting to wonder.