Bride of Discord Blog Logs Chapter 1

So me being a Fluttercord fan has never read the Bride of Discord story. So I'm going to read though this story one chapter at a time and then post it on my blog. Then at the end of the story if it ok with DisneyFanatic I will do a review of the story but this is just going to be my own thought about the story starting with chapter one: The Escape.

So The Escape starts with Twilight and her friends defeating Discord and this chapter background painting and characters are pretty good so far. My main problem with this story is the dialogue, now dialogue between two characters are important it shows who and what they are and why they have became that character. My problem is the spacing.

Now when character are talking there has to be a new line E.G,

"Hello, how may I help you?" The unicorn pony asked with a smile

"Oh, I was just looking" said the Earth pony.

See, where as in the story there are no spacing and the story doesn't flow right well to me anyway. But Celestia says to Twilight that Discord ran away before The Elements could hit him. I bravely ran away, away. As we get to know a little bit about The Element of Harmony

I like this we don't know what these gems do besides shooting a rainbow at the big bad guy that somehow fixes everything. So to sum it down they are confusing. Nothing more, nothing less. Then years pass by, never say how many years so I'm guessing after season 4.

Where in some crazy world where the ponies remember that the girls saved Equestria and that Twilight is a princess I always thought that everyone in Equestria has short team memory lost and that would make sense on why no one remembers the main six being heroes. That and Discord being colour blind, think about it in the show he didn't move when the girls attack him why, because he saw him as still gray it make perfect sense. But I'm getting off track.

As I said the girls beside Fluttershy all have a greater meaning in life. No that what the story says, I know it because that Fluttershy is still afraid of Discord whom is still out there. Waiting for the right time is kind of scary if you think more about it you can't find someone who doesn't like you and wants the world into his own chaos empire. Who is still out there just waiting for the movement, now that is just waiting and your biggest fear is yourself. It like Five Nights At Freddy's you know it going to happen. You just don't know when.

But that is it for today ladies and gentlemen. This wasn't that long of a chapter and not much to talk about sorry for that, anyway see you all tomorrow where I do chapter two: The Gala. Can not wait, so salty.