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  • 177 weeks
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Sep
29th
2015

My little pony dimensions: portal, more than just the characters. · 4:10pm Sep 29th, 2015

Just a heads up guys, when GlaDos speaks she'll use Bold letters. So you guys won't be confused. Enjoy.


KNOCK, KNOCK, KNOCK, KNOCK, KNOCK.

"Delivery!"

The portal camera is set up, aiming at a wall, and fiering a portal. Jacob, Bert the fox, Jess the black cat, and Luna were zooming through the vortex, to the next location, and they've arrived.

Is that you? a female robotic voice spoke, No, your not her. Your just another unwelcomed visitor.

Location: Aperture Science

The team was in a room, listening to what the voice is saying. Welcome to the Aperture Science computer aided enrichment center. I would say its nice to meet you, but its not nice to lie.

"Who's she?" Bert asked.

"That's GlaDos, she's the artificial intelligence running this place." Jacob replied, "She is also in possession of the cake and we wish to acquire it!"

Why do they always want the cake.

"So, thou does have a cake." Luna said.

Yes, but first...a test. A door opens to another room.

Bert was trying to help Jess, up to the button, on the platform, that is really hard to get to, but failed. Jacob hits a keystone and three different colored portals appeared, one on the ground, the other two near the buttons.

Shift mode: activated

Allows characters to travel through one of three different colored portals to solve puzzles. blue, yellow, and purple.

Unauthorized portal detected.

Jacob pulled out his touchscreen tablet. It had images of his team and the colors of the portals. Jacob picked Bert and moved him to the purple portal. Bert got sucked in by a portal that appeared behind him on the floor, and came out of the same portal, but in the observation room and pushed the button.

What, how did you do that?

The same for Jess, a yellow portal appeared on the floor, she back flipped into it, and came out on the platform she was trying to get to.

Scale mode: activated

Allows characters to shrink,allowing to fit small spaces, or grow, to lift heavy objects or press down on pressure plates.

Bert stepped on a pressure plate, and a few turrets toppled into the toxic water.

Stop that. That's not how it works.

Then he walks through the vents, reuniting with the team.

Modes activated:
Shift
Chroma
Elemental
Scale
Locate

Luna hits the chroma keystone and three different colored plates activities. Red, blue, and yellow.
Bert, Jess, and Jacob got covered in the colors. Bert and Jess, touched each other and the doors opened.

Latter, the elemental keystone was activated. *Bert* had fire, -Jess- had water, #Jacob# had lightning, and %Luna% had plant.

-Jess- had put out a fire, that Bert had accidentally started, with a large blast of water.

%Luna% created a plant bridge, over the large pool of toxic water.

#Jacob# was energizing two generators with chain lightning and stairs were formed from the walls.

*Bert * was being protected from the flames, by a fire shield, while trying to disable the flamethrowers.

Latter on, the locate keystone activities, and Homer Simpson came swinging in on a wrecking ball, but he was on the ball. The ball then slammed into a wall.

You know, your rule breaking just now made me realize how much I miss my last test subject.

The doors opened and Chell enters the room, with portal gun in hand. "So, you must be Chell." Jacob said, she nods, "Well, we need your help. With you, your puzzle solving skills, and your portal gun, we will stop The Order of Sin."

My Little Pony Dimensions

A blue rift opens and a certain moron personality core came through. "Yeah its me," he said, "mind me say I-I love these new, blue portaly things."

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Comments ( 2 )

Not bad, can't wait! :twilightsmile:

Oooh! More hype! :pinkiehappy:

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