I'm... *sigh* going to rewrite The Brony Life... for real this time. · 6:55pm Aug 3rd, 2012
Okay, okay, I know I said I'd reboot it with more clop... I got bored and didn't want to do it anymore. I just don't have that much fun writing clop. Sorry. I'm really sorry. But this time, instead of a reboot, I'm going to rewrite it, reusing a scenes from the unfinished reboot and current story. They're not identical, but similar and much better written with less errors. And I will post it after you can make 2 choices from any path. Once I release it, I want the community to help me with it. Such as, I want ideas, fixes, things like that. Instant feedback, to fix a problem before the story's done.
I'm really sorry about the first time, I promise I'll get it done this time. And this time, it's going to better. I'm going to make it more interactive; such as add good or bad interrupts like in Mass Effect. It would work like this:
"I don't think so, Chuck," you said, while pointing a sword at him. The wooden floor burned with fire as bits of the ceiling started to collapse. Chuck gave bone-chilling chuckle.
"And who's going to stop me? That money is mine. You're too much of a goody two shoes to even touch me." Chuck lowers his sword, and slowly walks away
Attack him while his guard's down. (Chaotic action) (There will be a link over this, to the chapter)
You do nothing, your honor is too great to attack an opponent unwilling to fight. Chuck exits the burning building, and you quickly run out the other door. A quick nod from you to him, and you trot off to your hideout.
(More text, then choices.)
Like it? Don't like? What could make it better? Any other ideas?
So far, the only interrupts are good and bad, which are named lawful and chaotic, respectively. I might do all different kinds of actions, like the one below.
If I do implant all of these, I think the example would be chaotic good, since you're stopping a bad guy, but using non-good ways.
So... again, I'm sorry for for not rebooting it, but I hope to make it up to all of you.
Leave thoughts in the form of comments down below.
Actually... I think Queen Chrysalis is a better example of Lawful Evil, considering she did infiltration. And I think Discord is a much better example of Chaotic Evil... being the embodiment of chaos and disharmony.
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It's just an example, I didn't make the chart.
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I figured.
You know, you can make a good argument for Batman being every single one of them. There is a chart.
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I know... there are tons of different official stories of all super heroes. You could put any super hero into any box, as long as he's from a different super hero universe.
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Batman takes the cake, though. He doesn't even have to change universes. Just one Batman will do.