Mad Max Story idea

OK, I suck and writing stories but I always have ideas. This is one:

“My name is Max and my world is fire and blood! The nightmares continue to haunt me and I believed they would never go away. I was falling further into madness. That would change when I found a young pony by the name of Big Mac.”

Twelve years before Max would be captured by Immortan Joe’s war party he would come across a young 10 year old colt by the name of Macintosh Apple. For Max, he would see Mac as a form of redemption and strive to keep him safe. For Mac, he saw Max as a father and would stove to learn from him everything. Together they would travel the wasteland, striving to survive and every so often help others.

During Max’s capture Mac would be used for slave labor and thought his “Pa” was dead. Mac would see his father again, after seeing him be mounted as a hood ordainment of a car. Seeing his chance Mac broke his bonds and hid in one of the cars. Eventually, Mac would hijack the car and chase down Nux into the storm. After the storm Max and Mac would reunite and together they headed to the War Rig. After the brief fight between Furiosa and Max, Mac convinces Max in helping Furiosa and the Brides escape. After escaping the Biker Gang Immortan Joe catches up to the Rig and tries to stop it. He would give Nux a gun to kill Furiosa but Nux would trip while traveling the Rig and lose the gun. Joe would then drive forward and try and force the Rig over. That is until his favorite bride Splendid, who is pregnant with his son, opens the door and forces Joe to hold fire and slow down. Splendid would almost fall to her death, which caused Joe to flip his truck thinking he would of hit her, if not for Mac grabbing her and pulling her back into the Rig.

The group would escape to the Swamp where Nux and Mac work together to get the Rig unstuck and pull it to a higher elevation. Mac would show his strength by hitching the Rig to his body and slowly drag the Rig out of the Swamp. Meanwhile Max and Furiosa would blind the Bullet Farmer and eventually, after the Rig was pulled to safety, Max would kill the Farmer and bring back the small arsenal of firearms to the group. It seemed that the group would escape and make it to the Green Place.

They would finally came across the survivors of the Many Mothers and learn that the Green Place’s water became poisonous and they had to leave. It was at this time that Splendid would give birth to a healthy baby boy. With nowhere left to go the group decided to take there chances across the salt flats. Max and Mac would stay behind and go there own way, till Max has a strange vision of his dead child and realizes that there is another way. Max and Mac would catch up with the group and convince them to return to the Citadel and block the pass, leaving Joe and his army trapped on the other side.

The group would make a mad dash back across the wastes but would be spotted by Joe and his army who would quickly give chase. After a ferocious battle, where most of the Many Mothers would die one of the brides and baby would be captured and where Furiosa seriously injured, Furiosa would get onboard Immotan’s Joe’s rig, the Gigahorse, and kill him. As Furiosa was fighting Joe and Max was fighting Joe’s army, Mac would also face off against Rictus. Rictus thought that Mac would be easy to defeat, after all he seemed to be a pushover at the Citadel. What he didn’t realize is Mac held himself back. During there battle Mac would use his strength to overpower Rictus and literally “Buck” him off the rig and into one of the rear cars, killing Rictus. With that done the group boards the Gigahorse and Nux sets the rig to crash into the Canyon to block Joe’s army. Nux would climb on Mac’s back where the big pony to leap into the Gigahorse and make their escape. The War Rig would crash into the Canyon and trap Joe’s army.

After Max gave his blood to save Furiosa the group make it to the Citadel. Max shows the body of Immortan Joe and Furiosa, the brides and the surviving many mothers would make their way into the Citadel. Max and Mac would not be joining them as they make their way back into the wasteland, looking up to Furiosa and nodding they’re good bye.

Back into the waste’s a gateway opens up and Big Mac, after regaining his memories, realizes that it is a way home. After convincing Max to come with him the two would enter the gate. Back in Equestria Max would transform into a large Earth Pony. The two make there way to Sweet Apple Acres where Mac reunites with his family and explains what happened to him and why he and Max where wearing such strange cloths. After relaying what happened to Twilight Sparkle Max was welcomed with open hooves to Equestria, Ponyville and the Apple Family.

With the aid of Princess Luna Max’s nightmares would slowly disappear. Applejack and Applebloom would be nervous around him at first but eventually would see him as a father like Mac did. He would help the ponies of Equestria with many challenges, in particular helping defeat Tirek.

“At least that way, together, come across some kind of redemption.”
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Maybe someone can use this to come up with something. I suck at writing dialogue and thats always been my problem.