The Road to Ponyville take a shot at Equestria Daily! · 10:20pm Jul 31st, 2012
Welp, here we go. I've given "The Road to Ponyville" another rewrite. I've corrected the grammar, spelling and tried to do away with awkward wording. I've also tried to better establish scenes throughout the story by adding some more details. This all goes in thanks to The Training Grounds for their help and patience with my work. Anyone willing to give this piece one more once over would be appreciated since I'm planning on submitting this to Equestira Daily.
Thanks all,
GlueFactory.
I wouldn't mind looking at it again
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Excellent! Thanks for your help.