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Sapphire Shores, the pony of pop, Equestira’s darling diva, has just made enemies of the “Friendship Six.” The how and the why will soon give way to their dire consequences as the six put the mother of all pranks into motion. Rain clouds will be booby-trapped, dresses will be sabotaged, pies will be thrown and vengeance will be bittersweet.

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 24 )

She hurt D'awwww-est pony's feelings...


Equestria shall burn for this.:twilightangry2:

“Wow, Pinkie.” said Fluttershy. “I didn’t know you were such a big fan of Sapphire Shores.”
Pinkie didn’t even blink.
“I have no idea who that is!” she smiled. “Charge!”

:rainbowlaugh:

Oh, Pinkie Pie, you are just so Pinkie Pie. :twilightsmile:

So, this looks like it's going to be interesting.

I was also going to quote my favorite parts, but there are far too many. I love how cartoony your writing feels, it really fits the show

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Thanks for catching those mistakes. And thanks for the comments everyone.

A hare brush

ow... :facehoof:

faux pas.

Oh, this is all gonna go so wrong. Can't wait to see how! :twilightsmile:

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You'll love it when a plan comes together.

Gluefactory! Yes! I love you! I've been waiting for you to write another fic, and here it is.

CRASH! POW! BOOM!
Fluttershy swore all she saw the stallion do was take off his glasses. The next moments were figuratively and literally, a blur.

:rainbowlaugh:

1612851 Why am I not following you?! Following.

“Fluttershy!” cried Rarity. “How fortuitous of you to show up!”

"Fortuitous" simply means by chance, not necessarily that an occurrence was a good thing, that's be more like fortunate. If that's what you were going for. But what do I know, I'm just an editor.:rainbowwild:

Keep it up there, bro.

And don't take this the wrong way, but you make Fluttershy cry better than ANYONE! I was nearly all broke up m'self.

Beautiful! I can't WAIT for chapter four!

Oh, man, poor Fluttershy. :applecry:

poor rest of them to me pranks are made to be cruel and full and hatred.

Oh hey Gluey, good to see your back.

And a very nice back it is.

(And I swear, if any humorless individual corrects my use of "your", I will scream.)

PPS

She skipped 15!

Bravo, just bravo! This is really smart and fun. I love how in character everyone feels. Fluttershy especially can be hard to pin down and you knocked it out of the park. My only tiny nitpick is that Fluttershy seems to go from being okay with losing the carrots because she's so busy cheering up her friends to suddenly devastated but that's a really minor things and is totally overshadowed by everything else. I love Rarity's dress especially. The thought just made me giggle.

This is a beautiful story and feels just like an episode of the show. Bravo.

Guys, she couldn't help it, she's freakin' kindness. There wasn't anything kind in what you were going to do!

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