"Memories" epilogue · 4:04pm Aug 4th, 2015
I read about her death in the newspapers (ignoring the headlines about Rainbow Dash punching Princess Twilight) and i figured something was wrong.
A mare of such a young age (younger then myself) would not kill herself unless something was very wrong.
After spending three days investigating the case, i have come to the conclusion that a pegasus stallion named Thuderlane was the cause for her suicide.
And after some digging and pressuring some "friends", i learned that Thunderlane was into some heavy shit, not only being a rapist, but also using blackmail and dealing in heavy drugs, date-rape drugs and steroids.
Finding out where Thunderlane stayed here in Canterlot was not very difficult, seeing as he is a member of the Wonderbolts. I will pay him a visit tonight and see if i can find any evidence linking him to miss Scootaloo's death.
It was late at night when i made my way to the hotel where the Wonderbolts were staying, and there where very few ponies about.
I donned my mask and made my way in through the service entrance at the back of the hotel without any trouble, and finding a computer with the guest logs proved to be no challenge.
So, it would seem that Thunderlane is in room 6-69. I shall pay him a nightly visit and show him what happens when you rape others, blackmail and deal in drugs.
The hotel seemed erieely empty as i made my way to the 6th floor, and everything was going according to plan. In my bag i had everything i needed to make this criminal scum suffer.
A bottle of "Joking Belladonna", a bottle of "Bloodfire", a bottle of Chloroform, a torn rag of cloth, a few syringes and a very sturdy rope are the tools that will see justice done this night.
Everything was quiet as i made my way to room 69. I used a simple spell to determine if Thunderlane was in his room or not. He was there, he was alone and he was asleep.
I cast a unlocking spell on his door, and it opened without a sound. After entering the room, i closed the door and locked it, casting a sound-proofing spell on it after the lock clicked.
I got the rag, the chloroform and the rope out of my bag as i slowly and quietly made my way to the bed where Thunderlane lay sound asleep.
I drenched the rag in the chloroform and swiftly put it over Thunderlane's mouth. He woke up and started to resist, but i held the rag in place and soon he was unconscious.
He was sleeping in only his underwear, that i removed before using the rope to tie him down in a chair. I grabbed a pillow case from one of the pillows and tied it into Thunderlane's mouth as a gag.
Now, with my victim secured and silenced, i began to search his room for any evidence that could link him to his criminal activity. I started by checking his cellphone.
It contained hundreds of photos of miss Scootaloo during various sex acts (mostly fellatio), and this alone would put Thunderlane in jail for decades.
But i was not done searching yet, and about five minutes later i found a small case containing drugs. Now he was bound to go to jail for the rest of his life.
Now it was time to punish this vile monster of a stallion sitting before me, so i readied one syringe of Bloodfire and five syringes of Joking Belladonna.
I gave Thuderlane a very hard slap across the face, and he woke up with a terrified expression on his face. He tried to get free from the rope, but it was useless.
"Good evening Thunderlane" i said in a threatening tone. "Tonight you pay for the crimes you have commited against your fellow ponies". I took out one of the syringes containing Joking Belladonna and showed it to him.
"This, Thunderlane, is Joking Belladonna, a poison of my own design. It permanently cripples any body part that it is injected into". i told him, watching as the terror in his eyes grew.
"You will suffer as you have made others suffer with your greed and lust" i said as i stuck the needle into the skin right above the base of his right wing.
After the injection, i could see his wing take on a purple-ish color as all the feathers started to fall off it. Another injection at the base of his left wing gave an identical result. He would never fly again.
Thunderlane now had two streams of tears running down his face from the pain and humiliation, but i was not done with him yet.
I walked around him and grabbed another syringe of the poison, and asked him: "Do you know where these other three are going?". He shock his head in fear.
I grabbed his ballsack and swiftly injected the poison into his left testicle, and watched it turn from dark gray to purple. I did the same to his right testicle and the base of his penis. Both turned purple as well.
He was crying like a small foal now, and it was a most pathetic sight. "You brought this upon yourself with your evil deeds, and now you pay the price for it".
I grabbed the last syringe and injected the Bloodfire into his neck. The effect was almost immediate, as his eyes shot open from the intense pain he was feeling in his entire body.
"Bloodfire makes it feel like you blood is on fire, does it not?" i asked Thunderlane as he squirmed against the rope binding him. "This is what happens when you anger The Crimson Shade" i said before grabbing his cellphone and leaving.
After leaving the hotel, i made a package that i put the cellphone in with a note that would lead the royal guard right to Tunderlane and his little drug stash. Thunderlane's suffering had just begun.
Leaving the package in the office of captain Shining Armor had been quite tricky, as he had ramped up security quite alot given recent events, but i still managed to slip in and out undetected.
Only two days later i read in the newspaper that Thunderlane had been arrested and that a public trial was to take place soon. I smiled at these news.
"Three Weeks Later"
"Thunderlane, you have been found guilty on all charges and therefore i sentence you to spend the rest of your life in prison with no chance of parole" said judge Harsh Justice as he slammed his hammer down.
After a three week long trial, Thuderlane's life of crime had been reveled to the public, and now he was to face a lifetime sentence for it.
Captain Spitfire had after these events decided to not only take the role of captain, but also the role of testing all the wonderbolts for drug usage. Needless to say, quite a few ponies lost their jobs due to this.
Rumble had it the worst. Not only did he lose his place among the wonderbolts, he and Thunderlane were both publicly disowned by their parents.
As i sat in the courtroom, i could spot Rainbow Dash alongside her coltfriend and fellow wonderbolt, Soarin. With her were also the other elements of harmony, trying to comfort the poor mare.
I can only hope that Thunderlane's imprisonment will mend at least some of the pain in her heart, and that Scootaloo can rest easy now that her death has been avenged.
The only future i can see for Thunderlane is that of a bottom bitch in jail. He had better not drop the soap.
Wow, this is great! You saw to it that not only that louse Thunderlane got his just desserts, but his little brother, too! Well done! Love it!
Sorry I missed out on all the fun, but I think you did a better job than I would have. I probably would've just physically gelded him, or turned him into a eunuch.
3400278 Thank you, and i did sterilize that bastard pretty good. Do you realize why i did not kill him?
3400294 You're very welcome, and yes, you most certainly did.
Well, as to that, to quote a favorite saying of mine, "There's worse things in life than death".
Being on the bottom of the food chain in a prison, and a known, convicted foal molester is one of them.
3400308 Indeed, i thought that death was to merciful for him.
3400310 Indeed it is. You did the right thing in this matter, and dear Scoots has been properly avenged.
3400352 Thank you, i did my best.
3400366 No, thank you for your valiant service in taking out the trash.
3400385 It was my pleasure >:)
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This is very well written, and a much better ending then the actual story got. I wonder if you could convince TheCamel to make this canon?
3633778 Why thank you good sir. I already tired to convince TheCamel to make this the canon ending, but he said no.
Now THIS is what i wanted to happen after Scootaloo's death. Thunderlane always gets away with his crimes in a number of The Camel's stories. I am so glad he finally pays for what he did, and will do so for the rest of his disgusting life.
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I to love myself a good revenge epilogue.
Oh... Well then.
Good to see my mate's work can still evoke such violent emotion.
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Rage, it is something I do quite well.