So I think I'm going to start doing random shitfic "reviews".

Of course, I mean this in approximately the same way Mystery Science Theater 3000 was a review program, whose critiques were on par with Gene Siskel and Roger Ebert's. Since you're probably not a drooling imbecile, I suspect you get that I'm being somewhat facetious there, and I'm probably just going to start ripping bad writers new holes to excrete from, that they might be able to shed some of their inherent shittiness.

So, without further ado, may I present the masterfully-presented heap of inanity that is "Retribution", by some manner of semi-sentient fungus that has named itself "THEARTIFICAILINTELIGENCE". Yes, apparently the capitalization is necessary. A sure sign of good things to come, is it not?

Give me a second here.

No. No, it is truly not. So I suppose we should start this little endeavor by finding out a little about the author his-/her-/fungi-self.

We start by observing some manner of hideous skeletal beast as this fine user's avatar. Now, when I say "hideous", I don't mean that in reference to the creature itself, because it honestly looks like something a special education student would scribble in the margins of their notebook during class. However, no accounting for personal taste, I suppose, so we go deeper.

The next immediately obvious target

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[gakposter]

Hope you grew past it, mate.