Not dating this story

Well I've released a one shot for fun and to help my writing abilities and so far i have more than double the number of likes than dislikes so i consider that a success. Hooray

I did get quite a few dislikes though (at one point i had more dislikes than views, no joke). So far I've been told i didn't really do much with the idea i had which is fair because i didn't really focus on it that much, more teh differences between the two Pinkies. But if anyone has more constructive criticism i greatly appreciate it