HELP ME HELP YOU!!!

As you know I have some editors and they help my stories from being full of errors and other bad writing stuff. One of my super critical editors has been on vacation and the others can only do so much. I appreciate the hell out of any time they take on my stories.

What has been bugging me is that there are a number of comments about being confused or lost at the end of a chapter. The comments are good in that they let me know something is wrong, but when I have been asking for feedback on the source of the confusion, I have gotten no answer or answers like "I don't know where to start" or "IT just left me confused." or "What the buck did I just read?"

There is a certain level of confusion/slash mystery I am purposefully writing in to keep you guessing. I am also trying to convey a bit of mayhem here. If the problem is not the story writing itself, the following list of things could be the problem or a place for me to start working on.

1. Grammar or wording (It's not bucking written well)
2. Scene structure/flow (Can't follow line of events/ need more description)
3. dialog or thoughts (who is talking or thinking what?)
4. to much happening (Lower the shitstorm)
5. I'm too young to understand the references or complex plot flow (No offense to anypony)

So don't tell me you don't know where to star, because neither do I. I have read over my story and had it edited, so I can't tell as well as you guys. Please leave comments that help me help you.

Sorry for the rant. I just care about you guys to much to give you crap.

If are confused and don't give me a way to help you then...

PS: Waves of discovery update tonight and I will be starting the next chapter of ATTTP too!