Getting off my lazy bum

Hello my three followers. (God that sounds pathetic) I don't know why you decided to follow my or my stories, considering I have no stories to speak of, but rest assured, I am trying to come up with something. I have an idea for a story about an orphaned unicorn colt the only problem is that. His character sucks. I have so many inconsistencies and doubts about him, for instance, I wanted to make him blind, because I got it from the snowdrop animation from silly fillies studios, but I also wanted to try and see how well I could write his character without any visual stimulation on his part, but now after trying to run it through my head I find that it might be a very bad idea.
I also have an idea for a displaced story if anypony is interested. The story is basically a crossover of MLP and Deadman Wonderland, specifically the character know as the woodpecker, (I don't know his real name. -sigh-) anyways it's really interesting to me because I haven't seen a displaced story about it yet, so it could be something looking into, I even have a basic plot thought out about it, so there's that.
Finally There is one more story idea that's been rattling away inside my head. It's a crossover from MLP and the legend of spyro video games. No not the originals but the one were he has to fight Malefore. If your not familiar with the game, I'd suggest you google it, because it was a really fun game, with voice actors like Gary Oldman, Elijah Wood, and David Spade, and all of them in the first game.
Anyways I'm rambling. BAD ADHD. BACK ON TOPIC. Right so those are the three idea's that I have for a story, and while I'm really wanting to do them all, some may not be do-able simply because the plot might not work, also I don't really have a computer of my own. I have to use the one at the local library, and I don't visit as often as I wish I could, and even then I only have an hour and a half to work, but all of that aside I'm going to try my hardest to work as often as possible, but no guarantees so sorry for that.
Finally onto the last bit of this whole thing. I am a goodish writer, at least I think I'm good, but from time to time I seriously doubt myself and I end up scrapping everything I have, so I would like some people to take a look at my work and tell me if it's any good or not, and maybe give me some tips on what could be improved.
so with all of that said and done, Please let me know what you think.