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UUUUUUUUUUGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm having colossal trouble figuring out my story! I know what I want to write about, but at the same time have no idea what I want to write!!!!!

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[Venatus21]

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[What is it that you want to write about?]
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[Be patient, and decide what kind of fic you want to write.]
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[If you force yourself to write, you will hate it and give up on it.]
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[You have to plan if you want to write a one shot, or a multi-chapter story.]
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[Make a rough draft of a story first, if you hate it, scrap it. If you like it, refine it and publish it.]
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[Also got to be careful of grammar and what the story is about. There are many people who put others down for bad fics. But criticism is good to improve yourself, so be mindful.]

[Queen Sombrra]

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[What is it that you want to write about?]

I want to write a Queen Sombra fic. Possibly including a few OCs from here, but not entirely sure since I have no clue what kind of story I want to write about.

[Be patient, and decide what kind of fic you want to write.]

Been patient, been thinking, heck even asked my BF for advise, and I'm getting nowhere.

[If you force yourself to write, you will hate it and give up on it.]

Thanks for the advise.

[You have to plan if you want to write a one shot, or a multi-chapter story.]

I'm thinking Multi-chapter.

[Make a rough draft of a story first, if you hate it, scrap it. If you like it, refine it and publish it.]

Been making rough drafts, not liking any. I've made 23 thus far and haven't liked any of them because the just didn't feel.......right, you know what I mean?

[Also got to be careful of grammar and what the story is about. There are many people who put others down for bad fics. But criticism is good to improve yourself, so be mindful.]

Maine taught me a really fun cheat for grammar checking. I've been warned about those kinds of people, so I'll just ignore any hurtful comments on my story and take notes from helpful/constructive criticism.

[Venatus21]

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Been making rough drafts, not liking any. I've made 23 thus far and haven't liked any of them because the just didn't feel.......right, you know what I mean?

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[I know EXACTLY what you mean.]
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[I can think of some story ideas if you want, but not right now. Gonna sleep.]
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[I will go back here to post the idea later. Gotta study for my AP exams and tests. Good night.]

[Queen Sombrra]

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[Venatus21]

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[Sorry, I was busy yesterday and was too tired to go on here to make a list.]
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[They aren't perfect since I am not a good writer or anything, but anything is better than nothing.]
-After the defeat in the Crystal Empire, the only thing remains is his horn. Rolling around or levitating, he finds an earth pony and mind controls it by levitating itself on to a crystal earth pony's head. Then it does a body transformation and he is now female. But the mare who he took control is now a talking conscious. Now this is where you decide whether R63 Sombra can become a good guy or bad guy, whether the conscious guides Sombra to the path of good or Sombra does not listen but does whatever he can to rule over the Crystal Empire. You can even take the story in a different setting since the horn went somewhere far away, so it could be easier to do the good guy way if Sombra is starting fresh or is not recognized where his horn was blasted towards.
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[I will try to post more ideas here later as new posts so you can see them later.]

[Venatus21]

Sombra's horn lands in the Everfree Forest, taking the magical ambiance in the air, he regenerates his body, however the magic he consumed was from the surrounding poison joke his horn happen to fall on and is now permanently female. Staying in hiding, she gets on the friendship express and goes away to -insert place here-.

This has some potential. This can be romance if she goes to for example, Appleloosa and Braeburn tries to woo R63 Sombra. Or you can make her a villain or hero at some pony place.

Another story idea:
Sombra's horn lands in Zebrica. Zebras finds the horn and experiments with it in brews and results in Sombra regenerating and becoming female. From here she can be a hero or villain since the Zebra's don't know about Sombra. You can write her as a hero if their is some kind of conflict within the village such as raiders or monsters, or you can write Sombra as a villain and manipulates the Zebra's into an army. But in my opinion, I like the hero route. But you can write whatever.

[Queen Sombrra]

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[hmmmmm.......not bad ideas, I might use a combination of a couple, but we'll see.]
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[If I use any of these ideas, do you want me to credit you in any way since you suggested them?]

[Venatus21]

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[If you want to.]
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[Good luck! Hope that these ideas help you write something.]