I'm going to rewrite the entire story. It will be mostly the same with a few key differences. The reason I am doing this is because I more or less wrote my self into a corner and this is the only way to fix it.
So from now on I will be updating Kingdom of Monsters every Wednesday and Grip of Nature at least every Sunday if not more. When Kingdom of Monsters is finished I will replace it with a different one (I have alot of ideas)
You could write what she tries to do now that she is a master dark mage. For example she might wish to have some followers and so she proceeds to make some.
Initially, I would look to her interactions with family and dragon. Her brother would oppose her new "lifestyle choice" where as Spike may stay to try and convince her to change. You would also deal with if she would be attempting to go directly for the empires control or on the run and develop further in the wilderness. Your options are nearly endless to this story you just need to find what role your most comfortable writing her in. Tyrant of an enslaved empire or on the run villain with everything to gain.
You could write what she tries to do now that she is a master dark mage. For example she might wish to have some followers and so she proceeds to make some.
3260427 Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm...
3261523 If you wish to hear more ideas from me just ask. I have many ideas but I lack the talent to transfer them into stories.
3261554 I need as many ideas as possible. So send them out
Initially, I would look to her interactions with family and dragon. Her brother would oppose her new "lifestyle choice" where as Spike may stay to try and convince her to change. You would also deal with if she would be attempting to go directly for the empires control or on the run and develop further in the wilderness. Your options are nearly endless to this story you just need to find what role your most comfortable writing her in. Tyrant of an enslaved empire or on the run villain with everything to gain.
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