MThe Mane 6 Visit a Strip Club
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The Mane 6 visit a local strip club for the first time.
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*ahem*
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Apr

15th

2015

Calling all of the collective internet grammatical police. · 11:32pm Apr 15th, 2015

An update of sorts to my previous blog before I get off. I was working on the next chapter of the Strip Club(two paragraphs done, aren't you proud of me?) when I decided that maybe now just wasn't a good time for inspirational writing, so I decided to do an edit that turned into almost a whole rewrite for the first chapter of The Strip Club.

*ahem*

HOW DID YOU GUYS READ THAT FILTH?!

My god, the errors, both grammatically and the story-line. Seriously, at one point I found a sentence that went like this(is about Twilight):
"...stood next to her fellow unicorn..."
"...her fellow unicorn..."
"...unicorn..."

Ok.... Well, back to the main point and the title of this blog post. If you have the time and are willing, please go through this story and absolutely DESTROY this new first chapter with your superb knowledge of the written English language. I'm almost positive I ended up missed something in that sea of garbage, and there were a few things that I wasn't entirely sure about correcting. Thanks, and wish this new schedule luck!

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