If so, you might be interested in hearing that I'm heavily considering a rewrite. I stopped writing it over several factors (dissatisfaction over the direction it took; I'm rubbish at writing Pinkie, etc.) but I'm thinking that, with the knowledge of the mecha genre I've acquired since quitting it, I can make something better out of its framework. As for the original story, I'll revoke its
I never liked the name C.L.O.P. for my big dumb mecha fic so I have now changed it to CELESTIAL LANCE. I feel the similarity to Mobile Suit Gundam is a good idea. Plus C.L.O.P. is just asking for stupid people to make "witty" comments.
I don't like the final three chapters, so some time soon they'll be unpublished and replaced by newer (better?) chapters. I've decided to change the scope of the story; make it smaller and pay more homage to my initial inspiration.