Next DDSR chapter! · 7:15pm Mar 14th, 2015
Well, next chapter of DDSR is going to be written soon, but the question is, do I write MacKenzie riding Applejack, or do I skip ahead, to after she's finished? You're gonna get as much porn overall eventually, and I'll write a deleted seen for dear Kenzie when I have the time. So here's the arguments for and against. Please consider before answering.
Arguments For:
1) Applecest is sexy
2) The ending did kind of imply I'd write it.
3) I'd love to show her abs rippling while she milks him.
Arguments Against:
1) After two whole chapters of a fic called "Diamond Dog Sex Revolution" that featured no diamond dogs, nor any sort of revolution, I'd like to get the plot on track.
2) From a storytelling perspective, it adds nothing. We know he's gonna get fucked by her, and it's clear how.
3) From a character-building perspective, it also adds nothing. I've shown her sexual abilities, and established how she approaches sex and dirty-talk.
4) From a sex perspective, there's only so much I can do with a musclemare. And she's got to save some tricks for later. I don't want to make that the same scene twice.
So basically what it comes down to is "Could be hot, but it's not good for the story." My instinct is to give it a skip. But if there's an overwhelming desire to see this scene NOW (Not just "In general" because it WILL be there) I'll at least take a stab at it. This isn't a vote, but I do want your input.
